Fifth Place

Dimming light candles flicker Dry ink No parchment found Wonder within thought Imaged sounds Tracing Back in time A rhyme Verse appeared A Contest With Constance La France My chance to win Yalto First But 5th place is fine Contest: Writing Challenge-Yalto Form Sponsored by: Constance La France Date Created: 12/13/2022

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Constance La France

Date: 12/28/2022 7:16:00 AM

Bobby, your Yalto is delightful and made me smile, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2022 10:16:00 AM

- But, we won't say no to a first place :) - Congratulations, Bobby :) - hugs

Bobby May
Date: 12/20/2022 3:24:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise

Ann Peck

Date: 12/20/2022 9:06:00 AM

How about first place :) Congratulations for your poem of contentedness with Fifth!

Bobby May
Date: 12/20/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/20/2022 4:39:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Bobby May
Date: 12/20/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/20/2022 12:47:00 AM

Very interesting written. You are 1st. Congratulations!

Bobby May
Date: 12/20/2022 3:25:00 PM

Thank You!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/19/2022 11:17:00 PM

Big Congrats to win. Have Good Days.

Bobby May
Date: 12/20/2022 3:25:00 PM

Thank You!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/19/2022 6:55:00 PM

Congratulations, Bobby!

Bobby May
Date: 12/20/2022 3:25:00 PM

Thanks Kim!! Merry Christmas Sis!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/19/2022 3:46:00 PM

Nice one, Bobby! Your tongue-in-cheek Yalto is a deserving top place winner! Write more, my friend. Congratulations on your top win!

Bobby May
Date: 12/19/2022 4:26:00 PM

Thank You Sir and thank you for inventing this new form! Have a great holiday!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/19/2022 1:35:00 PM

Looks like a first place to me, we’ll done tongue in cheek

Bobby May
Date: 12/19/2022 4:26:00 PM

Thank You!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2022 10:18:00 PM

Bobby, it sounds like you and the 'creatures of the night' holed up in the attic somewhere, producing miraculous verse from gossamer cobwebs and spidery mirth! Wow! You are DA MAN!

Bobby May
Date: 12/15/2022 5:54:00 AM

ha ha ha ha Thanks GW

Valsa George

Date: 12/13/2022 10:20:00 PM

You are very modest in your wish Bobby. A beautiful poem in Yalto form. All the Best to you !

Bobby May
Date: 12/14/2022 11:15:00 AM

Thank you Valsa!