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Below is the poem entitled FIERY SPIRIT LEAPS which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Slowly pacing a captive rail, her gaze pierces beyond red stars eyes with burnt ire, a tigress howls bellowing through jungles afar; As pride of theme parks, she deplores the ropes leashing an alluring gait, others like her, in silence weeps on circus grounds, in king's estate... Sleek beauty wrapped in orange-black her linings torn as branded fur, oh Sumatran lynx, endangered as man becomes the beast, she prepares; When nature guides a fired escape towering leaps endure what’s wrong, and moonlight scans bold tigress' maze on fields where her spirit belongs. ------------------------- "If having a soul means being able to feel love and loyalty and gratitude, then animals are better off than a lot of humans." - James Herriot Relate Your Poem To One Of These Quotes Giorgio V's Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 12/24/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara

  1. Date: 12/21/2013 6:28:00 PM
    I have always been fascinated by the big cats, especially Tigers...I have watched ordinary housecats stalk their prey...No difference at all... 'as man becomes the beast, she prepares'...WOW - Tim

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson
    Date: 12/21/2013 6:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And Merry Christmas!
  1. Date: 12/20/2013 11:36:00 AM
    superb Nette congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 3:57:00 AM
    Enjoyed the write on the selected quote and congrats on the fine win, nette

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Congratulations Nette... Linda

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Truly amazing as always nette! Congratulations

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 12:51:00 PM
    You're beauty is never sleek you're winnings never less than well deserved, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 11:47:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem Nette in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/19/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Congrats Nette!

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 8:04:00 PM
    Wonderful! Loved this one Nette.Wishing you a great Sunday my friend.

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 12:07:00 PM
    Yes where their spirit belongs....I haven't been to a zoo or circus for many many years because of these feelings.....wonderful nette.....

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 11:47:00 AM
    Classic and wonderful piece of work,Nette..Great write from a great poet...Kudos to you,dear friend...

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Great poem Nette... I am duly impressed! More like this please! Warm huggs, Jack xoxxoxo

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 6:56:00 AM
    You have pnned a very nice piece here. Alot of moving imagery within this very well written poem. And thanks for the welcome back... :) Lucinda

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 6:06:00 AM
    You turned her into one beautiful creature, enjoyed your poem Nette, I have sent you a soupy mail, love xxx

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 9:31:00 PM
    I believe the best line of this incredible write has to be the one in the first stanza, "eyes with burnt ire, a tigress howls" Wow, now that is a line my friend! You have written a powerful poem based on the prowess of a tiger! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and phenomenal piece this evening! What a brilliant poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:45:00 PM
    Brilliance is the correct word to use......I will borrow it from below......this again, reflects your talent !! Ps.........I see that you are sending a soupmail......I discovered my error in form...and fixed it (I think::?? I hope so !!)..Thanks for looking out for me !! :)

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Wonderfully strong inspirational lines.Almost defiant leaving a strong effect on my mind. You fill me up with your brilliance.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:42:00 PM
    I hope this is for the tiger contest, it is very well expressed Nette. I enjoyed this one very much.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Your fiery spirit leaps in this one. Beautiful and amazing as always. :)