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Fierce Raptors

The sun was shining, when the raptors flew across the sky. As blue as water in the carribean. They flap and squawk. As they were chasing a white pigeon to a mahogany tree. They were hungry Like a wolf. And eager to grab it. In certain might. Helplessly it stood on a branch. Before the tugging and tearing, the pigeon got a chance and escaped.

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Date: 2/27/2013 9:31:00 AM
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Asmau Sada
Date: 2/28/2013 5:11:00 AM
Ur welcome.

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