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Field With Petals Strewn

relaxing in the jacuzzi remembering when passion ran free, big smiles lit up her face as she recalled, the last time they had laid down... in a field far away was a long time ago they whispered "I love you". kissed goodbye, was time to go destiny deemed pastures anew time past ..now alone grandparents both...children grown people will be shocked by the re-kindled love...in poppy field with petals strewn penned 3/4/2018 contest....It's all about four..Broken Wings

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Date: 5/1/2018 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful verse and great imagery , Seren, {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:49:00 AM
Seren, CONGRATULATION on your win in my contest with this lovely and dreamy poem, well done!
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:48:00 AM
Very enjoyable and touching write Seren. The body fades but the passion remains.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:30:00 AM
Lovely poem, Seren. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem! A pleasure to read. Well done.
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