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Field of Rest

In a meadow in a field field of daisies field of dreams dreams of fortune dreams come true true blue true love's kiss kiss a frog kiss me quick quick like a bunny quick thinking thinking of you thinking about life life worth living life guard guard your heart guard your mind mind your manners mind over matter matter of fact matter of time time of day time travel travel by plane travel far away away from home away from it all all or nothing all is well well done well of water water of life water to drink drink coffee drink tea tea with lemon tea made in the sun sun rising high sun beams down down to earth down and out out of patience out of time time to go time to rest rest easy rest in peace easy peace 9/9/15

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/10/2015 4:56:00 AM

This form is challenging Kim. I have only written one ever. Your talent shines in t h is one! #7

Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:11:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Eric Boddie

Date: 9/17/2015 12:47:00 PM

I have to tell you kim....this is such an artistic gem....full of Beauty, full of insight....I just Love the style in which your pen writes....;)

Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:10:00 PM

Eric, thank you for your encouraging comment!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/16/2015 6:26:00 PM

Very good, well-written and enjoyable ... CayCay

Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:08:00 PM

Thank you, CayCay!

Anu Nayak

Date: 9/15/2015 1:47:00 AM

Beautiful blitz dear Kim! Nice thoughts flowing with ease....loads of love, Anu:-)

Kim Merryman
Date: 10/30/2015 10:07:00 PM

Thank you for your sweet comment, Anu!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/12/2015 1:10:00 PM

Beautiful pen Kim! I really enjoyed reading your Blitz. A delightful piece!A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you!:) Love. D

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 8:47:00 PM

Thank you, Dorian! So glad you enjoyed it! God Bless!

Joseph May

Date: 9/12/2015 6:13:00 AM

Beautiful write Kim...I think this would have been a first place win.....hugs

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 8:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Joseph! I didn't write this one for the contest, but I appreciate your vote of confidence!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/11/2015 1:03:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your Blitz poem..It would have done well in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 8:45:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! This one wasn't meant for the contest, but I appreciate your encouraging comment!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/11/2015 2:17:00 AM

Wow! What and excellent write. I love how it was constructed it is beautiful and brilliant........A.M.

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 8:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for your encouraging comment, Afolabi!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/10/2015 10:31:00 AM

cleverly done, kim! i enjoyed this read and bet you had fun writing it...

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 8:43:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/10/2015 1:55:00 AM

Kim, this is a blitz I really like with images to go plus the easy breathless passing of lines.. ~~Olive ELoisa =`)

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Olive, for your encouraging comment!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2015 12:18:00 AM

my goodness. Another blast from a blitz!! Way to go, but it looks like you did not get it into the contest in time. That is a shame. I can see you worked hard on this, Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/14/2015 5:36:00 PM

Actually, Andrea, I didn't write this one for the contest so its all okay. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. I really appreciate it!