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Field of Forever

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Snow crested range backdrop, gurgling creek allurement At long last was the field, ours its loamy splendor Our fertile paradise beneath stars and thunder Within this promise, we planted our enchantment Time sprouted our hearts’ dreams with sunlight reverent Steadfast home to shelter love through frost December Joyously nurturing new lives, mild and tender Yet a caretaker’s heart still yearns for nourishment Other fields of promise neglected, gone fallow Harvests left under the merciless sun to spoil Their once magnificent bounties, cupboards hollow Tears cannot mend cold ground neglected beyond toil Their heartbreak, a tragic fate we need not follow Come tend our garden, my love, till its fertile soil 5/29/16 © Thomas W. Quigley Italian Sonnet, 12 syllables per line

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Date: 10/19/2017 10:34:00 PM
A beautiful Italian sonnet, Tom. So richly textured, eloquently layered imagery. Such a beautiful jewel of a poem. It is my maiden voyage foray into your thoughts/feelings. I enjoyed this romantic cruise very much so. Btw ... are the original Quigley Down Under? I'm sure you get that a lot. Lol! Look forward to reading more of your talented work. May love light your path always.
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Date: 10/19/2017 10:32:00 PM
A beautiful Italian sonnet, Tom. So richly textured, eloquently layered imagery. Such a beautiful jewel of a poem. It is my maiden voyage foray into your thoughts/feelings. I enjoyed this romantic cruise very much so. Btw ... are the original Quigley Down Under? I'm sure you get that a lot. Lol! Look forward to reading more of your talented work. May love light your path always.
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Date: 5/30/2016 5:44:00 AM
Your wonderfully written metaphoric poem offers a clear message to your love to reclaim loves beauty before it fades and dies. I loved hearing your deep masculine voice which added richness to your words Tom. I hope you recite more of your poems. #7 ; )
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 5/29/2016 12:42:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Tom - You read it with feeling - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 12:21:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/29/2016 12:28:00 PM
A poem pregnant in poetic pictures. The last line is a gem....
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/30/2016 12:20:00 AM
Thank you, Probir!

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