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Fidgety fingertips tickling tempo and time, modeling melody, writing in rhythm and rhyme. Frolicking fantasy - magic in music sublime. Perfectly pleasing performance; cleverly crafting the climb. _ ,=---C=o=) " as 12/11/19 McWhirtle Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by charles messina

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 2:13:00 PM

Beautifully crafted and I love the alliteration, Many congratulations on your win, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx

Hello There
Date: 12/26/2019 6:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! I'm happy you enjoyed this! :) Ours was beautiful, and I hope you enjoy the rest of this holiday season as well :) hugs <3

Chris Green

Date: 12/26/2019 7:39:00 AM

Congrats my friend on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved for this fantastic poem.

Hello There
Date: 12/26/2019 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris :) It was an interesting challenge, especially trying to use the proper rhythm :)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 9:39:00 AM

I love this, HT. Awesome write with some great word play. Congratulations on your win and Happy Holidays to you and your family. -Charlie

Hello There
Date: 12/26/2019 6:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie, for the cool challenge and placement :) Happiest Holiday to you as well and all of your loved ones!! <3

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/14/2019 3:55:00 AM

I love frolicking! This poem frolicks!

Hello There
Date: 12/14/2019 8:41:00 AM

Lol. Thank you, Caren! :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/12/2019 7:12:00 AM

Being a guitar player this one really spoke to me. I love this form and how you crafted your words to fit it perfectly. There is a soft melody that accompanies this piece as if a tune playing in the mind that you just can't help but hum. Nicely done my friend.

Hello There
Date: 12/12/2019 2:44:00 PM

Aw, thanks, Chris ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece and could relate so well :) An interesting form, for sure, but a fun challenge ;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/12/2019 5:03:00 AM

This one just flows along so smoothly very well crafted and sure to be a winner. Wonderful write :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 12/12/2019 2:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandy ~ I really appreciate your wonderful feedback :) hugs

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/11/2019 8:28:00 PM

An abundance of alluring alliteration...a super fav my friend...ta ta ^WW^ :o)

Hello There
Date: 12/12/2019 12:57:00 AM

Fly away now, ^WW^ ;) Hope to see you again soon, and thank you so much for the honor of a 'super' fav and a friendly visit :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/11/2019 5:12:00 PM

Cadence of your poem is so very beautiful--a superb write, HT. A sure win this is.

Hello There
Date: 12/11/2019 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay, for your vote of confidence and compliments :)

Na Na

Date: 12/11/2019 5:03:00 PM

Nicely done H.T. best of luck in the contest.

Hello There
Date: 12/11/2019 7:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory! :)