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Fiddler's Love Song

The fiddler crab plays as he eats A high pitched tune, around the dunes A fast rhythm most can repeat The fiddler crab plays as he eats All can play a song so sweet Fiddling to their love songs at noon The fiddler crab plays as he eats A high pitched tune, around the dunes

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Funom Makama

Date: 2/16/2015 12:47:00 PM

This is beautiful and nicely crafted. Thanks for the share... Sometimes its refreshing visiting old poems of soupers... Its amazing, the freshness which comes from doing this... And that is exactly my enjoyment visiting this piece

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/2/2014 2:03:00 AM

Hello Sara, how well you wrote this one, a serenading crab..' take care..'

Jack Horne

Date: 10/26/2014 10:32:00 AM

would love to hear this, Sara - this must be something you've heard and seen at your creek?

Leon Enriquez

Date: 10/24/2014 10:45:00 PM

Dear Sara: Enjoyed this poem. Sounds better when read out loud. All the best, Leon.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/24/2014 9:56:00 PM

I really loved reading this illustrious write this evening! You have delighted me with your very spectacular poetry again! I see a pattern here with your triolets, very creative! I like this one better than your other one that your wrote later! But the other one was awesome too, just that I like this one better! What a grandiose piece! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2014 1:47:00 PM

- Sara, this poem I like very much - Lovely, enjoy reading :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/24/2014 12:01:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this fun loving Triolet Sara.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/24/2014 11:39:00 AM

Very cute triolet Sara! Enjoyed it pretty much, my dear friend. God bless you! take care. Love and Light! xxx D.