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What if all that there is, and all there has been, and all that we know, is just somebodies dream. If we’re all just creations, in a fictional land, where each move we make, has been carefully planned. Where the lives that we live, be they tragic or kind, are the product of somebodies, formative mind. And perhaps if that’s true, is that someone aware, of the lives they have made? If they are, do they care? Then to take it one further, what if they are as well, just creations in someone’s, imaginary world. What if every tale, ever told, heard or shown, somewhere out there develops, a life of its own. Where the fables of this world, are factual and true, or where somewhere the fiction, is the story of you.

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Date: 6/23/2016 9:45:00 PM
Danielle, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Danielle Humphreys
Date: 6/24/2016 1:36:00 PM
Hi Linda, thanks for your message and your support. I've been enjoying the feedback I've received so far and am looking forward to improving my abilities and reading through other peoples poems, I can tell there is some great talent on here.
Date: 6/19/2016 7:40:00 PM
Good thoughts on this first post. Danielle, here you will find poets who will help you flourish among the community. Skat
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Danielle Humphreys
Date: 6/20/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thanks. :) Glad to be here. It seems like a great site so far.

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