Fickled

As cool raindrops caress red leaves And waterdroplets cling Clouds shade red berries of the dogwood Formed in early spring Fall makes a big splash, rains all day Soon will come October's cold But who knows what fickled fall will bring, cloudy? sunny bold!

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 10/1/2015 3:56:00 PM

Well you never know, what the weather or the mailman will bring, well done Sara

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/1/2015 10:13:00 AM

Oh, those pesky words - how they want to be remembered! Still love the poem, and now the flow. You made me laugh, I didn't fall, I'm okay and the poem is great ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2015 10:09:00 PM

Hey, Sara - good to find you on the new poem page - my 1st visit there all week. Very pretty w/ great rhyme - I tripped a little over the last 2 lines, but re-read. I enjoyed your poem ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/1/2015 5:07:00 AM

I hope that you did not fall..By the way I left out the word fall..LOL..Sara

Dan Cwiak

Date: 9/30/2015 12:33:00 PM

Wonderful words, Sara. I love the red berries of the Dogwood.