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Fickle Lover

The remorseful ocean murmured her regrets For the fierce tantrum She had thrown the night before. She unfolds her pleated skirt Along the shore And whispers,“Come.” She has seduced me before And is trying again. Her tide’s long arms Wrap lovingly around the rocks And lavish wet kisses On their craggy faces. I hold her in my heart And dance with joy On the sun-drenched sand. She is a fickle lover Who ever toys with my heart And draws me Down to the sea again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/20/2011 6:23:00 PM
I REALLY LIKE IT GREAT WORK
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Date: 11/19/2011 12:00:00 PM
Wonderful piece. This flowed into my mind just like the sea.
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week William. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, William
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Date: 11/16/2011 12:49:00 AM
Oooooh NICE I could see a great image by just reading this epic poem!
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William Crocker
Date: 11/19/2011 10:09:00 PM
David, I'm delighted to see the number of responses you sent me.They're greatly appreciated.I will certainly read and respond to some of your poems.Thanks Crossfox
Date: 7/23/2011 9:15:00 PM
Willi, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.am
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William Crocker
Date: 7/25/2011 4:24:00 PM
Destroyer,I'm new to this site and haven't figured out how to use it yet. I appreciate your comment and will be reading and commenting on your poems before long.Thanks william crocker
Date: 7/21/2011 7:18:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Bill. Love, Carol
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William Crocker
Date: 8/8/2011 4:38:00 PM
Carol,I'm sorry to be so slow in replying but I've been away to Canada seeing my very ill brother.Thanks for your great comment.I'm going to catch up on my poetry reading and replying soon.We,in Cal. ,are having a much cooler summer than usual.William crocker.
Date: 7/17/2011 6:06:00 PM
I LOVE THIS!!!! Beautifully thought out and written.
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William Crocker
Date: 7/18/2011 4:55:00 PM
Sharon,Thanks for the kind comment.I tried to locate your poems but couldn't find any.I would love to read them.Crossfox-Bill.
Date: 7/17/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week William. Love, Carol
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William Crocker
Date: 7/17/2011 4:58:00 PM
Carol,I appreciate your comment.I'm still struggling with the procedures of this site.I'll be getting to comment on your poems as soon as I figure it all out. Crossfox-Bill
Date: 7/16/2011 3:22:00 PM
Definately a superb comparisson, written beautifully!
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William Crocker
Date: 7/17/2011 12:14:00 AM
Kyle,I haven't figured out the procedures of this site yet so I'm a little slow in posting my poems and replies.Thanks for the comment. Crossfox -Bill crocker

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