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Fickle Cloudburst

Reminding yourself to breathe as the stratosphere is falling, imagine verses tumbling midst downpours' dissension sans sentimentality's loquacious language, and the land is left barren as verbosity disintegrates and emotions wholly perish 'neath fickle cloudbursts of poetry's extinction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/10/2016 10:13:00 AM
"'neath fickle cloudbursts of poetry's extinction" I really liked that line. You create a scene that feels warm and spring-like but chills like a dark winter's eve.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/10/2016 10:23:00 AM
I love your poetic review, thanks so much Chris. Imagine?

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