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Fibonacci Verses

I Sigh Tears cry Pain stabs my Heart as hurts hurl high Only melancholy replies... I Look Find hook A dry nook In worn-out old book Feel so afraid, kind cheer forsook! I Mine My finds To align Fragrant peace of mind Pray for some emergent design.... I Know Warm show In sure flow To feel words that grow A Valentine's Day urge that glows! Leon Enriquez 14 Feb 2014 Singapore

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Date: 5/24/2015 12:53:00 AM
that seems like an awesome form. SK
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/26/2015 9:06:00 PM
Dear Skat: Yes, Fibonacci stanzas are challenging to write, but the end results speak tons! I was experimenting with these briefly. Thank you.
Date: 2/14/2014 6:36:00 AM
I am not familiar with this form, but I like it. The constant rhymes give it a beat that pulls you through.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 2/14/2014 9:13:00 AM
Dear Monterey: Believe it or not, this is my first attempt after seeing what others have done! I just made it a bit more challenging with the rhymes. thanks for your feedback. Leon

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