Fib 42

I Can Deadpan Take more than Any other man This will be my unwritten plan Continuing to take silence time and time again From the most beautiful woman Till I'm an old man Madman Can I

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Chris Green

Date: 11/8/2016 12:14:00 PM

Really nice and extremely thought provoking. I had a deadpan once, but once it burnt my lunch, I had to replace it. :) Nicely crafted piece.

Inverse Storm
Date: 11/9/2016 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Chris. Nice fib. LOL

Inverse Storm
Date: 11/8/2016 1:21:00 PM

Thank you Chris. Nice fib. LOL

Inverse Storm
Date: 11/8/2016 1:18:00 PM

Thank you Chris. Nice fib. LOL

Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2016 12:36:00 PM

The pan thing was a fib by the way. :)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 11/8/2016 11:31:00 AM

Well, Master of Fibonacci:wonderful form Of poetry: Among poets you are a Storm!

Inverse Storm
Date: 11/8/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Ovidiu. Fibs are a favorite pastime of mine.