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Few Dimes For a Meal

He roams through empty boulevards To sleep at night… alone, Where from the unlit doorway Is a makeshift called home. By morning, arm raises thin palm, In hope that passers-by Could drop a few dimes… watch them fall, Then maybe eat a rye. While sensing a deluge of rain The boy hears the winds roar, All drained, old shanty torn apart Can of soup, peas… no more. Yet a young waif needs to survive, Without time for regret He pleads gently, needing a meal; A vagrant's life in debt 7/20/2015 Debbie Guzzi's Contest Food Can't Live with it can't live without it by nette onclaud

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Date: 7/23/2015 11:12:00 AM
and they become invisible to most as they go about their lives. Congrats on the win
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:33:00 AM
a powerful poem Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:22:00 AM
Nette what a lovely write dear, congrats on ur awesome win!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:25:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your win, I was amazed by all poem. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:32:00 PM
I really loved this poem nette! Full of emotion and compassion.
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Date: 7/21/2015 12:35:00 PM
Powerful write, Nette. I don't think there is anyone who 'll read this and not be affected. And yet, even with such subject the beauty of your lines cannot be denied. A winner, for sure! huggs
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Date: 7/21/2015 8:13:00 AM
Very emotive and expressive work..Sad to think that a child is alone in the world without the support of parents..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/21/2015 1:47:00 AM
Striking poem!The way you have entwined the words and emotions left me teary-eyed.A deluge of deep thoughts.
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Date: 7/21/2015 1:24:00 AM
When in the UK my wife, a Psychiatric Nurse Therapist, used to run a homeless outreach service providing some food, Counselling and health checks in the inner city. People are homeless for all sorts of reasons we tend not to consider. All we can do is what we can, when we can. So sad. Good write. Kind regards, Ian
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Date: 7/20/2015 9:38:00 PM
regretable to know the such...the hole in me wants so much for these souls best, yet, only a meger sum from this one with hopes of the Almighty's finger of love soon to come and cause their rest dear poet. Sullen yet poignant Nette ! Have a blessed week dear friend.....much love, james
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:29:00 PM
Excellent as usual.....
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Date: 7/20/2015 4:33:00 PM
It is so sad that so many still suffer and are hungry. Thanks for bringing this to light...Tim
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