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Fevered Dusk

Comes the fevered dusk A sultry breeze across skin banking sun's embers A brief respite from the heat of which to sip and gaze stars
7/11/2011 Paula Swanson For the contest, Tanka You Sponsored by Francine Roberts Placement: 1st

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Date: 7/21/2011 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful.......Well Deserving!!!!Congrats....
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Date: 7/19/2011 2:44:00 PM
Great 1st place win, Paula!!!
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:54:00 AM
Beautiful Tanka, Paula. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 3:36:00 PM
Great poem. lee
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:50:00 PM
lovely image my skin got goosebumps!!! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2011 1:25:00 PM
My co9ngratulations on the firstb place win in the contest, Paula
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Date: 7/17/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/17/2011 9:04:00 AM
congrats on your 1st place win, this tanka really captures the essence of a summer evening...
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Date: 7/17/2011 6:14:00 AM
well deserving of the award! grrreat top stuff, paula... : ) huggs
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Date: 7/17/2011 5:37:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS! no doubt about the win . . . so terrific and extra ordinary write . .
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:35:00 PM
I loved this the first time too!! A big Congrats for your BIG win, Paula.
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:24:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your first place win with this fevered dusk luv.. another awesome venue my friend..
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:01:00 PM
congrats Paula on your first place win in the contest
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:21:00 PM
wow, I just love that line "banking sun's embers" very original, Paula! I think alot of us are seeing summer night this way!
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