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Fervid Refinery

Licking flames Rage... Heat penetrates, Ashes smolder... Purified stone Emerges.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2014 7:44:00 AM

Great winning work..I wonder what stone that would be...Congrats on your win..Sara

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/14/2014 6:59:00 AM

awesome take in 10 words poem!! Congratulations, Nicole!! :O))

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/14/2014 6:43:00 AM

what a golden write.. :) creative write.. :) CONGRATULATIONS.. :) =OLIVE_ELOI

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/14/2014 1:08:00 AM

brilliant take on the theme of stones. congrats on a fine win, nicole

Skat A

Date: 4/13/2014 8:20:00 PM

Awesome 10 words, SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2014 4:25:00 PM

Lots of descriptive images you got into this one, which Nette loves. Congrats on a great win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/13/2014 2:15:00 PM

Wow great ! Pure stones !! Liked very much Nicole ! Congrats on great win !!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2014 1:08:00 PM

- A poem about STONES in just 10 words - not easy - but it was a lot of good poems nevertheless - Congratulations on your winning poem, Nicole !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/13/2014 12:42:00 PM

Beautiful... congratulations on your first place win... Verlena