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Fertile Spring

Lover #1 cherry tree blossoms sweet scented perfume distilled your lush fruit revealed Lover #2 rutting buck rattles virile stag catches sweet scent drifts through fertile fronds nubile does snuggle closer suitor fondles coy lover

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Stephen in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/14/2011 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest Stephen :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in Deb's contest. This is a great pairing of haiku and tanka.

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 12:58:00 PM

Beautiful job Stephen, it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in fourth place honorable win, Agaape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/13/2011 12:32:00 PM

Congrats to you..its all about love..sigh. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/13/2011 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Debbie, Stephen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2011 7:25:00 PM

Congrats Stephen on your super win in Love Talk contest with awesome dialogue between the lovers luv.. enjoy another great chart topping win with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2011 4:11:00 PM

Great use of illiteration -- just enough. The first verse is great and the second one is absolutely fabulous, Stephen. Love those last two lines!! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/12/2011 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry and win, Stephen. Love, joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 3:49:00 PM

oops, sorry, t was fourth, but almost same thing!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 3:48:00 PM

Hey, I saw this just last night and here it is at third place. WAY TO GO, Stephen!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 10:48:00 PM

very "nature"al and GREAT title for it!

Jessica Carr

Date: 3/10/2011 8:14:00 AM

awhh ,, i love these kind of poems nature is a great way to express feeling and i get the vibe that this poem is about young love like spring ,, very well written :)