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Ferris Wheel

#Ferris wheel It was one of those nights that you are not altogether surely did it happen. there are no photographs, no receipts, no scrawled journal entries. just a memory sitting in my mind like a half blown fireworks, rushing to fill colors to the sky, waiting to disintegrate into nothing. as i close my eyes, the picture played like a blurry montage. I can see us driving for hours,until the street lights grew less familiar the flickering post lamp, giving away to the stars. then sitting across with you on a highest Ferris wheel ride, I see your soulful eyes enticing, mirroring the beautifully lighted town from south, embracing lake fields and mountains, your hands reaching mine, your voice wisps a husky tone. the conversation we had about everything, and nothing. And kissing you- i remember that, It was one of those nights my mind can't be sure of, that wonders if I was there at all, it is as though i never left. --km

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Date: 11/5/2014 7:26:00 AM
deep very beautifully crafted piece katrina bless you
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Katrina Monique Cayanan
Date: 11/8/2014 2:21:00 AM
Hi Liam Thank you. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 11/2/2014 6:03:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Katrina - I choose your first moving and very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Katrina Monique Cayanan
Date: 11/3/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thank you Ms Anne Lise for your warm welcome! I am enjoying my time here.. oxox _Katrina :)

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