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Fernando Ramone

Fernando Ramone was a Latin lover Who dazzled the girls with his charm He could often be seen strolling along With a gorgeous girl on each arm It didn't feel much different this night Though the mood in the bar was uneasy As he wandered in, all eyes were on him He was sweating and feeling queasy Tension was thick, could be cut with a knife With conviction he strode to the bar A shot rang out from the back of the room Ramone dropped, his mouth oddly ajar Patrons froze as he lay in a heap Not a single sound could be heard A man emerged from the back of the room Strode forward without saying a word Gasps were heard as he came into the light Deputy Marshall John Parker by name Tracking down Ramone for many years A rampage of mayhem his fame Ramone was wanted in twenty-three states For a ten year murderous spree Asked why he shot him without any warning Parker mumbled the name Anabellee Anabellee was one of his victims And the daughter of Deputy John Rage and revenge was all he could feel Then the vengeance was suddenly gone Deputy Parker is now serving time For the murder of Fernando Ramone Some say Parker should really be freed But killing cannot be condoned © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 8/26/2014 7:14:00 AM
WOW! This is some tale, Kenny! You really wrote this with so much finesse...Absolutely amazing. This is proof positive of your great story telling skills, my dear. Hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/26/2014 8:09:00 PM
WOWSERS!!! Thanks a bunch Miss Boop! With these positive comments I'm getting, think I'll write more of these! Thanks Queen Eileen... XOXOX
Date: 8/25/2014 2:40:00 PM
Surely this is based on real incident ? it captured my attention from line one. A great movie in my mind !
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Date: 8/25/2014 3:00:00 PM
A movie... fame... stardom!!! Will I still be able to remain this sweet loveable old duffer!!! LOL Thanks my friend, much appreciated!
Date: 8/25/2014 10:46:00 AM
It seemed so true on him! Amazing write Jack ! Can't believe it was fiction, u hv given life to the character indeed !
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:57:00 PM
You are too too kind my dear Upma! Maybe I'll write more of these... big loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 8/25/2014 10:27:00 AM
You did it! You wrote an AMAZING story poem... Am I rubbing off on you?... Dragon's moping around because it's not about him... I loved... LOVED this... You go Jack... Sorry I wasn't on the internet... We were down in our area... Sun Spot? Heat?... Who knows... You go Jack! All of these I read today were sooo unique, fun... and cool... You did them to impress me... Right?... LOL
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Date: 8/25/2014 10:35:00 AM
WOWSERS!!! That's quite an amazing response dear Carol! WOWSERS again!!! What a sweet supportive friend you are! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 8/25/2014 9:40:00 AM
Great historic write if I hv construed it right Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/25/2014 10:31:00 AM
Fiction... pure fiction! Thank you dear doctor! Huggsies XOXOX

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