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Feral Dance

The human form so slightly alters And tells a tale of times gone by Even when the voices decry Our spirit never falters. Spinning with each turn of the globe Dancing forms are changed Some may say we become deranged As our skin begins to disrobe. Feral creatures control the floor Our hackles raised as we dance Giving ourselves to our trance Two legs shift to four.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/11/2011 10:26:00 PM
the rhyme is real and i like the rhythm of the poem
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Date: 2/9/2011 8:14:00 AM
gorgeous gorgeous GORGEOUS poem. 7/7 for sure :)
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Date: 2/6/2011 11:18:00 AM
Thank you so much! I'm so glad I'm one of your favourites! :D
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Date: 2/6/2011 11:15:00 AM
You are going into my FAV. POET slot... wow, look forward to more of you work, and thanks for supporting my contest
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Date: 2/6/2011 11:11:00 AM
Wow beautiful poem! The imagery is intense!
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