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Felt Right

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Felt Right

This girl moves like a snake 
to the beat gets me swaying 
the lights glow on her 
beautiful tan freckled face 
her passion is breath taking 
every time I close my eyes 
she's still dancing around my
head to bad the last song 
had to be played I would have 
loved to stay in that perfect moment
with her in the middle of the
electric factory floor moving 
not caring about the outside
world because right then nothing
mattered anymore i felt totally 
free to be me

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  1. Date: 9/29/2013 8:53:00 PM
    This if full of heart and emotion. Takes the reader on journey in your heart and mind. good job