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Felt Right

This girl moves like a snake to the beat gets me swaying the lights glow on her beautiful tan freckled face her passion is breath taking every time I close my eyes she's still dancing around my head to bad the last song had to be played I would have loved to stay in that perfect moment with her in the middle of the electric factory floor moving not caring about the outside world because right then nothing mattered anymore i felt totally free to be me

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Date: 9/29/2013 8:53:00 PM
This if full of heart and emotion. Takes the reader on journey in your heart and mind. good job
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