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Feline Night Presence

Cat howling, after Midnight, before dawn, is darker than sound, Made when no ones ‘round.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/28/2014 12:01:00 PM

if a cat howls and there is no one around to hear it, does it make a sound? This is persuming of course that the cat itself is deaf. Don't mind me, my mind takes trips on me *lol*

Chaim Wilson
Date: 11/29/2014 6:09:00 PM

A poem that is not enjoyed by anyone doesn't rhyme, thanks for enjoying! The cat, if deaf, still "hears" inside the howl as "Meowwwwwwwwwwwch!"

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/27/2014 10:07:00 PM

Very nice haiku! truly enjoyed it! A 7 for me! Have a great day my dear friend Chaim. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Chaim Wilson
Date: 11/27/2014 10:13:00 PM

Thank you for the compliment, it makes me try harder to write! Thanks for reading!