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Feelings Within

Feelings Within (Ameri Sonnet) Every time you pass through You’re appealing to my eyes I find peace just seeing you You’re looking so very nice. There’s this feeling deep inside It is making my heart sing I find you so appealing Like the beauty spring does bring. We’ll be together one day You shall never be alone Within a wonderful way You’ll be my queen on the throne. Prayer is still the best way With blessings every day. Erich J.Goller Copyright 12.24.2011 Seven syllables per line

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Date: 5/26/2013 9:16:00 PM
rich, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless * Always~ LINDA
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Erich Goller
Date: 5/26/2013 9:33:00 PM
thank you very much ,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,Hugs!Erich
Date: 12/9/2012 7:05:00 PM
So you did a contemporary sonnet with seven syllables per line. It's interesting to experiment within different forms. Very nice, Erich
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Date: 12/9/2012 9:16:00 PM
'thank you very much Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Date: 1/28/2012 10:12:00 PM
very well written. I like the added royalty towards the end. :D
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Erich Goller
Date: 1/29/2012 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Kristine, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich

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