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Feelings Rise

Feelings rise No compromise Waiting to surmise The look in his eyes Finally to realize The time has come It has just begun To see what shall become

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/2/2010 11:49:00 AM
I wish that I could vivify my comments to you and to all better. But I end up babbling and making no sense. So, I will leave you a message today letting you know I did read your poetry and I enjoyed it. I love reading poetry and the poets here are so talented. Have a wonderful day Jodie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:05:00 AM
Very flowing words with equally nice rhynming on feelings, Jodie
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