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Feelings of Dread

You welcome the close of day when the sun gives up its light. And dream how warm he could be on a cold and lonely night. His subtle scent still lingers on the pillow that you clutch. And emotions draw a tear at the thought of his touch. You're happy he's in heaven, but his death is hard to bear. Yet, he oft visits your dreams and the memories you share. He made good on his promise that your wishes would come true. And your heart grew two sizes the day he proposed to you. You know you will meet again, for his spirit is not dead. But you can't help but miss him, fueling feelings of dread. (Quatrain) 9/20/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 12:58:00 PM
A very emotional write, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 9/21/2015 4:27:00 AM
Emile, you have soft heart really... awesome writing~~Olive ELoisa =`)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/21/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Olive, your words have touched me. Emile.
Date: 9/20/2015 2:50:00 PM
Very touching and beautiful writing. Well done!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/20/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Howard, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 9/20/2015 2:40:00 PM
a very good depiction of what a person in this situation must feel. At first I thought it was for the emotions contest but then realized a child would not get this very much. they are so young and have no idea about this. I really enjoyed this one, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/20/2015 2:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, your words have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

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