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Feelings

to feel beyond the eyes they cannot see where there is love there is life churning at the bottom in a deep ocean swelling out dripping on paper blowing upon the breath a kiss breathing frost cold ice turning black within silence in dense dullness freezing to the insides a cold lonely heart slowly becoming warm dripping in love's beauty morning dew of spring bringing life to a beautiful feeling happiness blossoms mingling in air one of delight petals of emotion i stand in the harsh winter before spring forgiving the past in a beautiful circle this world becomes beautiful once again

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Date: 9/17/2013 6:41:00 PM
I know exactly what you mean in this poem. The world seems like a cold and dark place when we are alone, then we find a friend who brings warmth and color into our lives, changing our outlook completely! A very heartfelt and inspiring poem, Liam! Wonderful poetry, I loved it!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 2:58:00 PM
KELLY THANK YOU FOR THE DELIGHTFUL BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED MY FRIEND
Date: 9/17/2013 12:16:00 PM
Good one...its soooooo it!..learnt more of free verse from you....thanks
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 2:56:00 PM
THANK YOU DEARLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT
Date: 9/17/2013 11:18:00 AM
Hey Liam, A wonderful write from you buddy...I liked this one. Ken
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/19/2013 2:34:00 PM
thank you my dear friend for the lovely comment deeply appreciated

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