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Feeling Unknown

Off to my corner In the depths of a world that moves to fast I stand here alone from time to time Thinking about all the memories from a time long gone All i want right in front me So close but still out of my reach Everyday i"m fading Fading further from where i want to be Choices made that drive the nails in deep Lock in my own personnel coffin with no escape I hear it over and over again thought after thought swimming through me Once so strong but now I'm worn worn so thin Will i ever stand on my on again Please leave comments I am looking for constructive criticism

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Date: 7/9/2016 1:59:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, JAMES...SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 10:53:00 AM
Hi James, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/22/2015 1:07:00 AM
James, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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