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Feeling the Season

feeling  like dancing
on fluffy clouds of colorful petals
inhaling the  heaven scents
as I imagine an autumn
through my vicarious experience






Nov. 1,2012

This is gogyoka form of poem.


Second Place
Contest: Gogyoka
Contest Judged: 11/7/2012
Sponsor: Poet Joann Grisetti

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/8/2013 1:57:00 PM Hi Leo... how are you stopping by to say and read a few of your poems again...LOL..thank you so much for making my morning seem better than it was... always~ you sis ...pd Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/3/2012 9:02:00 AM Feeling your hugs like the season.... I'm at work...looking in on my phone...hi...sisie.... how r u...pd Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/1/2012 4:01:00 AM love this, belated congrats, harry Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/21/2012 9:22:00 AM Congratulations on your finish in the contest. Sweet natural scenes here!Love & Peace Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/10/2012 5:57:00 PM Leo, my sisie-pooh, :-) how are you??CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/9/2012 2:08:00 AM Hi Leo, Congratulations on your well deserved win missed seeing you about . xx Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/8/2012 11:00:00 AM Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Leonora. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/8/2012 9:49:00 AM Why is it a "vicarious experience" Do you live in a very warm climate? Intresting work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 11/7/2012 9:54:00 PM This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Leonora. Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 11/7/2012 5:26:00 PM congratulations. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/7/2012 4:17:00 PM Hi, sweet Leonora, good to see you today by going thru this winners list. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/3/2012 11:03:00 PM Hi, Leonora.. are you here on the soup right now... :-) pd Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/3/2012 5:04:00 PM Norie, dropping by to check if you have a new one.. spin away!...:) huggs Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/3/2012 2:04:00 PM Hola, sisie-pooh... nice to see you here. and above all... I love this wonderful Tanka, i love all the images ...wow..can you imagine me inhaling this wonderful heaven scent image... love it...pd Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/3/2012 2:06:00 AM So glad to see this gem before I go offline Its after 2 a.m now here. STayed up late. It was a bad day. And didn't have time to do anything with Soup until now. Well, I did a blog for Susan if you want to go see it, earlier this day. Have a lovely weekend, Leonora. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

David Nickle Read Date: 11/2/2012 10:28:00 PM Feeling the beauty of your words, inspiring....... Read ;{> Login to Reply

Tanya Harrington Date: 11/2/2012 2:53:00 PM Ahhh, you had me at dancing. :) Love this gogyoka! Tanya Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/2/2012 12:45:00 PM a stunning depiction of a season graceful as your lines floating on this page, nora... all the best and huggs!:) Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 11/2/2012 12:37:00 PM Nice poem; i can just imagine to be dancing on the fluffy clouds, than looking down on all the beautiful colors. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/2/2012 6:14:00 AM Amazing poetry you have shared with us Leonora. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2012 3:34:00 AM Lovely Leonora. - Today is yours and you can use it for whatever you want. Have a wonderful day and use the weekend to something fun. oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/2/2012 2:27:00 AM wow what a dancy little tanka, love it xx Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 11/1/2012 11:07:00 PM Lovely and lively Leonora. Login to Reply