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Below is the poem entitled FEELING THE HEAT OF IT ALL which was written by poet Kib G. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Drip drops of sweat falling down my face,
As earth revolves closer to sun and space...
                   I wonder
Boom bang sounds from the sky,
As the clouds part and began to cry...
                    I wonder
Ahhhh with a sigh of relief,
As I do the rain dance in the street...
                     I wonder
If he knows that for all these things I feel truly blessed,
For this is luxury in comparasion to the world which lies in total destress...
                      I wonder
Does he know just how GRATEFUL I AM non the less.....
                      I wonder.

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  1. Date: 5/27/2011 7:38:00 AM
    Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Kibi. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 2:37:00 AM
    lovely way to describe the rain...