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Feeling In the Middle

How do we see when the world is so wet do we fit in to the lives that are made for us or are we shadows into the world that we set with our stars ever so far away as the memory of begining is gone to wander the world is a thought to the end

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Date: 2/5/2016 5:39:00 PM
Jai, Excellent read. Great flowing piece. Have a nice day. ** SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:17:00 AM
Welcome to PS! Good write! Thought-provoking! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/27/2009 4:28:00 PM
Welcome to soup. Very fine lines that you have presented here this night the day after Thanksgiving. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/25/2009 7:43:00 AM
i read your poem nov 2009'
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Date: 11/20/2009 12:30:00 PM
Pretty good poetry.
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Date: 11/20/2009 11:12:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jai. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/20/2009 1:36:00 AM
Good work philosophical bell'
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