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Feeling Beautiful and Loved

I miss you I miss you looking at me I miss you looking at me with those eyes I miss you looking at me with those eyes full of joy I miss you looking at me with those eyes full of joy and love I know you are here to help me feel beautiful and loved I know you are here to help me feel I know you are here to help I know you are here I know you Always have

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Le Sain

Date: 12/16/2023 12:19:00 AM

This poem called so much weight without being super heavy or lengthy. Brilliant.

Le Sain
Date: 12/16/2023 12:20:00 AM

*carried-called

Pivotal Poetry

Date: 10/27/2023 7:08:00 PM

Beautifully penned, less is more. Love the way you did this. :)

Bray Holt

Date: 10/27/2023 10:18:00 AM

I like this poem because of its clever use of repetition. It reveals the layers of meaning in our words and how saying less can mean more. Congratulations!