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A form of poetry created by poet Robert Keim in 2008. It is a 50-line poem of
short phrases and images. The "Blitz" poem is well-named, as the fifty short
lines are read in rapid-fire fashion. “The form really relies on sound and
rapid "flow." ~Rob Keim.
Here are the rules:
Line 1 should be one short phrase or image (like “build a boat”)
Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the
first word in Line 1 (something like “build a house”)
Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2
as their first words (so Line 3 might be “house for sale” and Line 4 might be
“house for rent”)
Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4
as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines
Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48
Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47
The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first
word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47)
There should be no punctuation, except for an ellipses after the final two words
in lines 49 & 50.

 

 

I still recall I still feel Feel the pain Feel the strength Strength of mind Strength of spirit Spirit kept me alive Spirit that fought Fought as an underdog Fought against chance Chance to breathe Chance to shine Shine to heal Shine like stars Stars that delight Stars that inspire Inspire to create Inspire self-belief Self-belief ends doubt Self-belief helps to succeed Succeed against setbacks Succeed to progress Progress for dreams Progress for fate Fate is in our hands Fate can take time Time never stops Time can be a nemesis Nemesis full of ego Nemesis we can defeat Defeat can deflate Defeat has lessons Lessons to stop mistakes Lessons I've learned Learned to mature Learned to heal my soul Soul is silent Soul is poetry Poetry is my catharsis Poetry is my truth Truth sets you free Truth brings justice Justice for the oppressed Justice needs principles Principles give us morals Principles define character Character gets us through life Character brings love Love... Life...

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Date: 1/3/2024 7:54:00 PM
Dear Silent One, you have delivered a brilliant blitz poem! The essence of your verse flows seamlessly from line to line retaining its pace, strength and message throughout. A fantastic, thought-provoking piece, my friend. Your last four lines are golden for a great finale. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/2/2024 2:23:00 PM
The power of truth liberates individuals, while also ensuring a fair and just society that fights against oppression. However, it is important to remember that the pursuit of justice must always be guided by ethical principles. Your message resonates with me, as you have successfully captured the essence of a profound and seamless expression. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/2/2024 7:04:00 AM
WoW! This is such a cool form and you did it so well. Love the way it flows from one word to the next. Loved this my friend. God Bless and Happy New Year. JB
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Date: 1/2/2024 4:43:00 AM
AMAZING. love it. Congrats to you. love and prayers, God bless you too. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/1/2024 8:52:00 PM
What a brilliant blitz this is! I truly loved the flow of your lines and the truth woven here, so sincere and so seamless! Theres so many lines that made me go whoa! And it reads like breath of fresh air! You truly are so gifted and good with these blitz, i felt the ones about fate, how fate is in our hands and it can take time, sounds comforting as sometimes we might feel like it is not! And about time… it surely feels this way right now that time never stops and time can be our nemesis!
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Date: 1/1/2024 8:53:00 PM
This year i hope many will find justice and will feel less oppressed in a world that can leave one feeling oppressed .. love this! Another fave
Date: 1/1/2024 8:42:00 PM
? :) Now this is poem alchemy pole position to finish strong. "...Soul is silent Soul is poetry Poetry is my catharsis Poetry is my truth Truth sets you free Truth brings justice Justice for the oppressed Justice needs principles Principles give us morals Principles define character Character gets us through life Character brings love Love... Life... "!" (Victory Lap ??)
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Date: 1/1/2024 4:53:00 PM
It seems there is no boundary your talent can not conquer, my friend. A brilliant poem my friend.
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Date: 1/1/2024 3:16:00 PM
Deeply portrayed, "Love life"- and the flow was beautiful and honest.
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Date: 1/1/2024 1:08:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write. Love This One. Thanks for the information on the top. Something new for me. I could feel your character. Have a blessed day writing away in 24................
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Date: 1/1/2024 6:26:00 AM
Truth sets you free Truth brings justice Justice for the oppressed Justice needs principles--I like your message, SO. You achieved the sound and rapid flow you speak of.
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Date: 1/1/2024 6:18:00 AM
I just listened to the song, wow, xo
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Date: 1/1/2024 6:17:00 AM
wow I have a hard time keeping up with you S O, oh but I do admire, have a great day love
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Date: 1/1/2024 5:45:00 AM
Hello Silent One, an excellent poem!! Have a blessed,creative new year!!
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2024 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, all the best..
Date: 1/1/2024 5:37:00 AM
Ahh, dear Silent One, you are inspiring me to try more poetic forms, I've been wanting to write a blitz ever since I read your previous one.. But, reading this, oh my, it's absolutely amazing! I might have to re-think about writing one now..This one is very deep with moving emotions as dwells in the dimensions that speak of resilience whilst incorporating every line with wisdom.. Love the flow of this, it's honestly so brilliant!! I especially love "Soul is poetry", "Time can be a nemesis" Wow
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2024 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Hiya, I really like this form.. so you can imagine there will be a contest coming up soon.. I look forward to your blitz.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/1/2024 5:39:00 AM
So thought provoking and inspiring in many ways! I'm awestruck by your artistic poetic skills.. "Poetry is my truth", "Justice needs principles" Woah, so many spectrums you've dealt with here.. Absolutely wondrous and it's definitely another FAV for me :)
Date: 1/1/2024 5:34:00 AM
wow, this is magnificent!!! I love the unfolding and admire what you've created here. Great way to begin a creative new year! Sara
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Silent One
Date: 1/1/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Sara, been waiting to post this one, wrote it a while ago...

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