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Feel Me

Feel me ,an emotion deep inside your heart An emotion that lives,an emotion that begs for not another night to let us be apart. Feel me , an emotion that bleeds How it bleeds,and it breathes The scarlet of roses on your empty sheets. How it blows, It blows softly and sweet it's petals and perfume in your moon -dappled sleep It blows softly and sweet like a garden breeze Like leaves that flow gently ,descending so slowly on your light -feathered pillow of dreams.

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Date: 7/8/2016 4:03:00 PM
Re-visiting some of my favorite poems. Such beautiful thoughts. Have a blessed weekend Charmaine.
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Date: 8/1/2015 11:16:00 AM
I feel you all the way....so many heartfelt things you say....spread this message everywhere beneath and above....because what this world needs is simply more Love....;)
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Date: 7/9/2015 7:14:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 7/5/2015 6:12:00 PM
very deep beautiful pen charmaine wishing you a blessed day pal
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Date: 7/1/2015 4:14:00 PM
The feeling is one of mixed emotions in which romanticism is surely the ultimate winner. Top marks to you Charm! All the best. // paul
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:08:00 AM
"how it bleeds" It bleeds perfection. Wonderful write. Blessings to you. :)
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Date: 7/1/2015 9:12:00 AM
Very beautiful Charmaine.... I'm sure he feels you. He feels you in his heart and in his dreams. Another romantic verse sure enough to woo any man...a favorite.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/1/2015 6:33:00 AM
Very Romantic write
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