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Feeding the Ducklings

The ducklings waited expectantly, Hungrily and wearily, They saw the bread from afar, Feeding time! Here they came, The race began, They flapped and squawked, Biting and scrapping Argued and squabbled, Aggressively they told each other, Back off it’s mine! Hunger had turned them wild, As they all headed to the child, She stood there, Innocently waiting Excited as they came, Throwing the bread All fighting for first place, Greedily snatching As much as they could And attacking each other, She tried to share the crumbs evenly So the weakest got some, As the hungry beaks snatched, She felt sorry for some, Her bread was gone, She thought tomorrow again, As the scene changed, And calmness came. 10/05/2016 For contest Sponsor Eve Roper

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Date: 7/17/2016 5:53:00 PM
WENDY, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 7/18/2016 3:11:00 AM
Thank you Skat xxxx
Date: 6/12/2016 8:47:00 AM
You described this scene so well that you gave it life, Wendy! Children enjoy feeding the ducks, while the ducks enjoy being fed:) ~ Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/12/2016 11:50:00 AM
Thank you paul and sorry for the delay in thanking you I have prob don't get alerts anymore don't know why xxxx
Date: 6/6/2016 1:33:00 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/7/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Eve I cannot check any contest I' m having problems with my page x thank you xxxx
Date: 5/31/2016 3:45:00 PM
this is wonderful, wendy . By the way, I always loved the name Wendy!!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 6/1/2016 9:01:00 AM
Hi thank you Andrea I always wanted another name x I feel like wendy in peter pan x ha ha x But we have to live with it Who would call there daughter wendy x
Date: 5/30/2016 6:00:00 PM
Wendy, this is such a good poem a 7. Read my blog for how I felt. Hugs eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/31/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Eve you're so kind xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 5/29/2016 1:03:00 PM
Hi Wendy Now I've time to get back to poetry again. Loved your poem on feeding the ducklings. Reminds me of my early childhood when my mum used to take me to Yeadon Tarn with bread for the ducks. Tony x.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/31/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Tony x great to hear from you again x where have you been x
Date: 5/10/2016 7:22:00 PM
G'day Wendy ... nice description Wendy of a typical scene in a park with a lake where ducks are fed - good job - Lindsay
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/11/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay xx
Date: 5/10/2016 5:49:00 PM
I agree with Barry - very descriptive write Wendy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/11/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Jan xxx
Date: 5/10/2016 4:31:00 PM
Very descriptive, well written piece, Wendy. Good luck in the competition
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/10/2016 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Barry nice to meet you x

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