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Feedback Echoes

Feedback Echoes? I shout out into the dark void! I cast my tunes out wondering? My words transmit the pictures. Mind floats on the notes I hear. Giving heart rises and falls with the melody. Great hurts and pleasures flow with the lyrics. Spirit floats over the waves of light. Sputtering packets of energy undulate! Why do my eyes see what others do not? Waves of endless colors, words and numbers' assault! Packets of energy assail and pelt me! Pushing me towards the unknown answers. Differences and opposites melt into one. Do I have the right to see this? Feedback echoes maybe do I hear? Flowing into my mind, heart and body? Tell me is this what it all means? To see the light, the dark and the grays?

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Date: 8/4/2016 12:59:00 PM
Great poem that poses a question. I am now following you. Cheers
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Hillard Sarver
Date: 8/4/2016 2:03:00 PM
Thank you for reading and reviewing this writing. I am using this site to get my poems ready for at least a e-book. That being said if you ever see a spelling issue or a wrong word issue please let me know.

Book: Shattered Sighs