Get Your Premium Membership

February Fever

In the battle of the poets Closeted within their dens, Words their only ammunition Shooting from their ink filled pens, Seeking phrase uniquely pretty And an unused metaphor, They have not the time to help me Woo the one whom I adore. Without muse or bard assistance Am I equal to the game? In trite words of deep devotion Will the message be the same? I can't say it grandiosely As I beg you to be mine. The old words will have to do then. "Will you be my Valentine?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/24/2010 6:07:00 PM
Hi Joyce --you have a real beauty here! enjoyed it.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2010 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations on home page feature of your beautiful valentine poem...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2010 8:00:00 AM
lovely, congrats on being featured this week
Login to Reply
Date: 7/24/2010 7:51:00 AM
Bravo Joyce!you live up to your name your folk blessed you with and knocked me off my old chair with this one.wish i,d heard that being said to me 40 years ago.yahooooooooo.more power to your poetry and you should be looking for a PAUL MCCARTNEY.just like LENNON.musicians would be fighting over your time.so get to GIGS.All the very best of luck.jona.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/23/2010 9:08:00 AM
Joyce, It is funny - though slam poetry once invigorated my love for poetry, I am a sucker for well written and strictly metered poetry. This poem was wonderful, and one of the best I have read on poetry soup. Very fun...
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry+ being featured this week Joyce. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 1:41:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a brilliant choice to share with us all.. with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 8:46:00 AM
Very cool poem, and probably the most relate-able one to every scriber on this site and abroad. Speaking for myself only, I started this journey in writing, because of love for another.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 6:19:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Jan
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2010 9:14:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on both your entries making it to the first round of competition in the Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend.. good luck.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/8/2009 11:47:00 PM
Ahhh, I LOVE it, Joyce! So nicely done. Donna G.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 8:06:00 PM
I reckon if he won't he should - Beautiful poem - Love is the air - God Bless, MJ
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 6:21:00 PM
This is strong poetry, they should have a title for that as well. Enjoyed this piece and have a great day.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 5:24:00 PM
Ilike this one, right from the heart. Thank you for reading my poems.....God Bless
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 4:23:00 PM
Happy Valentine's Day soon Joyce! The old words are indeed the best. Precious write! And I am sure the answer will be a big YES! Love, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 4:09:00 PM
Oh how sweet...Happy Valentine's to you Joyce. Cute write.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 3:03:00 PM
You did it simply fine and dandy!! Sometimes simplicity is more beautiful than "fancy"!!! :) Love, Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2009 2:55:00 PM
I love this piece.. the simple words will do just fine..no fancy metaphors needed..great job.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs