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Owls have always been a favorite creature of mine for many different reasons.  I wrote this narrative / didactic poem based on Socrates's excellent question about "What is Wisdom."  I incorporated various species of Owls to showcase philosophical schools of thought, and what better creature to represent Wisdom.  

 

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In twilight's realm, where moonbeams entwine, Two owls engaged in a contrast of minds: A Great Horned Owl, proud and strong, And a Great Gray Owl, cunning and long. Amidst the trees, their feathers shone, "Who is the wisest?" their voices cried... As their debate ignited, fierce and esteemed, Their claims soared through the moonlit tide. Their egos clashed, each boasting might, Arrogance veiling their inner strife. One spoke of conquests, unmatched and true, The other spun tales, manipulation construed. From the forest's depths, four owls appeared, With secrets hidden, their motives pending: The Screech Owl, with doubts that gnawed, The Laughing Owl, by pride, enthralled. The Barn Owl, haunted by past regret, And the Burrowing Owl, seeking power's beset. They gathered, judgment in their piercing gaze, To assess the claims, clear the arrogant haze. Each listening closely to their cadence, As they challenge each claim and test each mind. They use contrast, metaphors, analogy, and irony, To show how pride can deceive and blind. The Great Horned Owl glared with fiery eyes: "I hunt, I rule the night with might! My wisdom shines in my fierce flight." The Burrowing Owl hooted with a knowing glance: "Wisdom hides in a maze... To see beyond, to adapt and thrive, Wisdom's skill is ultimately... survive." The Great Gray Owl uttered with a grin like a knife: "Knowledge is power that I can spin! Beware the surface where truths are concealed, Wisdom's art is mine to wield." The Laughing Owl chortled with delight: "Wisdom is found in humorous blight! To find the answers laughter is key, A mirthful heart reveals what's free." The Great Horned Owl boasted with chest puffed out: "My strength and wisdom surpass all! Bow to my greatness, or surely fall!" The Barn Owl said with silent wings: "Wisdom dwells in knowledge wide... In seeking truth in ancient scrolls, The wise sieze the world's unknowns." The Great Gray Owl articulated serene and wise: "In silence, I glide unseen and calm... My wisdom lies in the tranquil psalm." The Screech Owl squalled its doubts revealed: "Arrogance blinds wisdom concealed, Look within for truth's unveiling, Pride's armor can be most failing." The Council of Owls in silent debate, Witnessed weaknesses that each owl did state. No consensus emerged, no victor declared, For wisdom's mystery is rarely bared. Each owl with flaws carried wisdom's spark, Their weaknesses, strengths, an indelible mark. But what is wisdom? Can it be defined? Or is it a paradox that haunts the mind? Is it strength or skill or knowledge or art? Is it humor or silence or humility or heart? Is it something we have or something we seek? Is it something we know or something we speak? These questions lingered in the air, As the owls pondered with solemn care. They realized that wisdom is not a prize, But a journey that never ends or dies. So the contest concluded, no winner in sight, A reminder that wisdom is not born of might. The owls flew undefined on paths enshrined, With humility's lesson in shadows they entwined. In a Rhapsodic style, their flaws were displayed, Their humanized traits their weaknesses conveyed. For wisdom seems to remain a complex quest, An eternal mystery in each owl's breast. Somewhere in the dark silent night breezes, Socrates whispers, "I neither know nor think I know— Wisdom is knowing you know nothing." And then he smiles and lets it go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/2/2024 3:10:00 AM
I really like the final stanza. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I like that you used owls and somewhat gave a description of them, so it is educational in two ways. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
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Date: 12/14/2023 7:25:00 PM
Your words hold me close, for a few reasons. One: Wisdom is better than gold. "Truth and insight are better than precious metals." Owls are considered to be wise, solitary creatures. (I completely agree.) An Indian friend of mine, no longer here anymore, called me "Little Owl." With that being said, that's the other reason, your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. My best to you, Daniel. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/28/2023 7:35:00 AM
Good Morning, Brandy, thank you for your lovely comments and I love that your friend called you Little Owl, a lot of the native languages do not have neutral words like it, them, that, etc. Therefore they only know each other by the proper names. Happy New Year “Little Owl” and May your moments, days and years be blessed beyond human measure. - Blessings, Daniel!
Date: 12/10/2023 11:21:00 AM
Dear Daniel, your final stanza is a grand and profound finale to a thought-provoking and evocative piece. I admire your use of personification and symbolism embedded in your lush verse, rich with imagery and wisdom. Congratulations for your excellent win in Ink Empress's contest. Warmest wishes.. !Susan
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Date: 12/10/2023 6:07:00 PM
Hello Susan, thank you for your wonderful comments and reading my poem and is always appreciated. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/8/2023 7:10:00 AM
quite an epic story you've penned here, in the didactic form no less! congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 12/8/2023 7:23:00 AM
Good Morning, Charlotte. Thank you for commenting on my poem. It took a while to write and keep everything in logical order. Thank you also for your Congrats! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/7/2023 9:06:00 AM
So many lines of wisdom, Daniel. Your poem shines in words of intellect.
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:56:00 AM
Hello Vijay, Thank you for your generosity in your words for my poem. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/7/2023 8:51:00 AM
Profound and exquisite poetry, Daniel. This is an excellent use of the form, and I applaud its layout. I appreciate the comment you have provided on my page.
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sotto, I appreciate you reading the poem and commenting and yes I enjoyed yours very much. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/7/2023 4:22:00 AM
I see you entered it in two contests.. congrats again.
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:54:00 AM
Yes, my friend and I appreciate you noticed and read the poem. - Blessings, Daniel!!
Date: 12/7/2023 1:42:00 AM
Dear Daniel, i remember reading this before and being in awe, and i must say this deserved a placement, for the depth and the creative nature of your write. I hope many will read and enjoy too. Congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comments. I appreciate being in the contest and hope to do more in the near future. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/7/2023 12:52:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Empress's contest. Best wishes. Wen
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Date: 12/7/2023 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend for your wishes. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 12/6/2023 6:08:00 AM
Excellent and epic poetry.. An excellent use of the form and I like how you formatted this one.. great choice for the contest. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:12:00 AM
Good Morning, My Friend! Thank you for taking the time to read and your affirming comment, which is always greatly appreciated. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/30/2023 2:35:00 PM
What a wonderful, so incredibly descriptive write Daniel and it’s clear that you put a lot of thought and time into writing it. So well written and flows beautifully. All your poems are so, so well written - incredibly crafted. I too, love owls and love how you have used them here into your writing. Very profound- what indeed is wisdom? Great philosophy here to ponder upon. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings.
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Date: 11/30/2023 4:22:00 PM
Hello Christina, I am so pleased to read your lovely comments and it is touching! Yes, Owls are my favorite and happy to hear you have a fondness for owls, also! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/27/2023 1:53:00 AM
A nice didactic write. As set out in the scriptures, pride was the prime cause of Satan`s fall. Pride and arrogance were the cause of the fall of Ravana in Ramayana and Duryodhana of Mahabharata. The humble person tries to know who he is and what is real goal in life.. KG
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Date: 11/27/2023 4:33:00 AM
Hello Krishnanand, I couldn't agree with you more that most human wisdom can be wielded in ways that are very sinful. Thank you so much for your comment and for reading my poem. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/21/2023 7:50:00 AM
Whoa this is such a powerful write, and one that can resonate to real life events and people around too, arrogance and ego getting the best of all, the most foolish of all claims to know it all. Wisdom they say comes with age but today i look around i see none of that is true. i must agree with your rhymes and metaphors “ that wisdom is not a prize,But a journey that never ends or dies.” Profound. And all those owls, so insightful too. Fav for me. What an impeccable write. Impressive
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Date: 11/21/2023 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend, for your kind words and insights into the poem. This one took months to write and change and change and change. Philosophy has always been one of my passions, and being part of Philosophical groups, questions like this get asked, and many try to answer. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/20/2023 7:06:00 AM
Wow….what a brilliant in depth poem/tale about owls and their humility, pride and wisdom. I enjoyed it thoroughly Daniel….Debx
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Deb, for taking the time and effort to send such a nice note about this poem. Owls have always been a favorite of mine. Have a happy Thanksgiving. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/15/2023 5:51:00 PM
It took me a bit but your talent is obvious. The wisest of owls says nothing and asks only one question, who? I hope you have a sense of humor, Daniel:) Have a pleasant evening and a Happy Holiday Season.
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Date: 11/16/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel and yes your Who, made me smile! - Blessings!!
Date: 11/13/2023 3:25:00 PM
wow, using various owls to espouse different philosophies was brilliant. How wise each of them were. I truly liked the ending lines, "wisdom is knowing you know nothing." well said & am faving...enjoy your evening. PS I admire your skills, Sara
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:34:00 AM
Good Morning, Sara. It is always a pleasure to see your comments and affirmations. Philosophy and psychology have always been passions of mine, and it is wonderful as you know to get your ideas down in writing, especially in poetic form. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 11/13/2023 9:57:00 AM
Personifying all species of owls is humanizing them to the flaws within us. "Wisdom is knowing you know nothing' is the humblest thought we can ever make. So then, what of the phrase, "Wise old owl?" It would seem to be another flaw. I always admire your writing skills, Daniel.
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:32:00 AM
Good Morning, Lin, Thank you for your comments and insights. I always loved philosophy and the challenges it brings to thinking about life's big questions. Yes, the Wise Old Owl is the term that is used a lot when considering owls and is part of the inspiration for writing this poem. - Blessings, Daniel

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