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FEATHERLESS ANGELS

Featherless angels, guardians of the land Hands that reach out to give a helping hand They have smiles that gleam and melt a cold heart They bring bright sunshine when hope seems to part They are like bright lights in somber places They give gold glimmer to gloomy faces They are like fountains where greatest love flow They are like armors when fiercest winds blow They don't have wings but they can fly For their soaring deeds touch the sky Featherless angels poetry contest 2nd place

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/6/2023 3:43:00 AM

Beautiful rhymes and flow of words, and you’ve described featherless angels so well here. I especially love the line “ They have smiles that gleam and melt a cold heart“ how beautiful are those that can touch our souls and lend a hand when in need, rare are those, and so precious and you’ve delivered so well about them. I love the finishing couplet too! Brilliant take. Thank you for writing. Congratulations on winning. Well Deserved

R. B. Cawis
Date: 11/6/2023 2:12:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind and creative comments...