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Feathered Seasons - For Contest

Feathered Seasons Peering out of the nest newly budded tree limb swaying jostling me as I await the early bird of spring returning with breakfast. Dust-dancing in the heat testing my wings in cat stalked gardens leaving home at mother’s request. Dodging the blowing leaves red crested trees mimic me as I revel in ripened plenty puffing feathers in the coolness of a new felt stirring. The wind no longer cradles me in weakened warmth of sun’s long shadowed departure. I fly to a known – unknown drawn by a distant calling. 4/3/2015 submitted to – Seasons – Poetry Contest sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 4/12/2016 8:51:00 AM
I used a tree in my poem. Glad to see all the seasons in the bird's eye, thanks to you!! Congrats,John, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:13:00 PM
John Lawless, Congrats in "Shadow Hamilton's Season, Contest." ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 4/9/2016 11:52:00 PM
I seldom get to see the seasons from the bird's viewpoint. Well done. Joyce
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Joyce appreciate the visit
Date: 4/9/2016 3:35:00 PM
A unique take on the seasons theme - congrats John:-) hugs jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 4/12/2016 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I often wonder as I watch the animals "what are they thinking?"
Date: 4/3/2016 12:16:00 PM
John, this is great, I am still struggling with an idea for this contest, good luck :)-luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 4/5/2016 9:17:00 AM
Yeah, it becomes very difficult to put a new spin on spring(especially when its 22 degrees and snowing). Thats why I tried to do it from the perspective of a single cardinal

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