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Feather With Hidden Meaning

Shaft of a white plume Lying dormant on the ground.... Who was the coward
Penned 13 July 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/16/2015 6:11:00 PM
I love the meaning behind this poem. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/16/2015 12:00:00 PM
I must say I agree with Lyric Man...but to take it a step further...I think I should like to see you write a movie ....not a book.....just pick your characters and go for it....you already have the title..."Who Was The Coward"...and I'm loving it already...
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Date: 7/16/2015 10:58:00 AM
I really LOVED your take on the theme Seren - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2015 12:09:00 AM
What an interesting way you did yours, Seren. Very creative!
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:21:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/15/2015 11:20:00 PM
This is a great interpretation on the theme, Seren. Love it. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:54:00 PM
Seren,:) Congratulations on your awesome feather win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/13/2015 6:39:00 PM
Yes, that plume holds a powerful meaning. A well written haiku. My best to you in the contest. ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/13/2015 2:19:00 PM
oh Seren this is so powerful nd an excellent take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan
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