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/ / x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x Autumn leaves flow past my window x x Colored leaves flit past my aching heart x X As long as you are away, love, my sorrow x x Does not depart, deep within my soul I long- x x There's an emptiness that can't be filled so x x do not even begin to start to try to con- x x sole, only tears like leaves will drop x x my only consolation is for your return x x Holy Spirit once more fill my heart x x use me like the decomposition of x x the redbud leaf, or the maple x x mulch, that enriches the earth x x feeding the tree for next x x year's beauty for man x x kind's feasting of x x of his heart x x or his soul X x x x

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Date: 10/10/2023 12:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win. It's so pretty.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/10/2023 2:08:00 PM
Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you stopping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 10/7/2023 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poetess well deserved
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2023 4:16:00 AM
Why, thank you, IE. I appreciate the visit with congrats. Sara
Date: 10/6/2023 4:32:00 PM
Lovely shape poem, Sara. Your words were heartfelt and strong. When our loved one is away, only the Holy Spirit can fill the void. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/7/2023 6:49:00 AM
Yes, Bill, the Holy Spirit is our great comforter. Thank you for the nice review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/6/2023 10:14:00 AM
Tears fall like leaves.: such a heartfelt write and i love the shape you’ve created so artistically! Truly an impressive and soulful write!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 11:52:00 AM
Some days for one reason or another those tears do fall, IE. I thank God it is not very often though. I like to be as cheerful as I can be most of the time. Your visits encourage me. Sara
Date: 10/6/2023 8:55:00 AM
Such an original shape and I admire the mixture of poetry and spirituality. Blessings.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 11:51:00 AM
Victor, I am so glad you like it. Your visits always are like a spot of sunshine on a cloudy day. Sara
Date: 10/6/2023 8:43:00 AM
Great wordsmithing! The title portends something different and you’ve stolen the show by seasoning it with Christianity. Love the decomposition enriching the earth for mankind’s feasting of his heart and soul. A fave, dear one!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 11:50:00 AM
Kim, You faving this one is an honor for me. I appreciate you doing that. Sara
Date: 10/6/2023 7:03:00 AM
Reverent nature poetry at its best Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 11:49:00 AM
Why, thank you, Tom. I am honored to have such high praise. Sara K
Date: 10/5/2023 2:40:00 PM
I appreciate your creativity here...the shape and the words express love of the autumn season...I find when I see all autumn's colors, I feel the Holy Spirit. Enjoyed your poem. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 3:58:00 AM
Thank you, Sara B. Yes, autumn has a special place in my heart. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Sara
Date: 10/5/2023 2:16:00 PM
WOW!!! What a write/shape. "Love It" Have a wonderful day................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/6/2023 3:57:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. Your visit is a nice surprise. I haven't seen you around in a long time. Sara
Date: 10/5/2023 12:49:00 PM
- A lovely poem ... great shape, Sara :) - If it's for contest, I wish you good luck :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2023 1:08:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the well wishes. I appreciate your point of view. Sara K
Date: 10/5/2023 12:23:00 PM
this kind of words and sentiments, match perfectly with automn well done poet
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/5/2023 1:08:00 PM
Why, thank you, Yann. Thanks for the well done. Sara K

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