Fears

clowns in town school and their politics and rules driving a car war death and God Himself...

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David Williams

Date: 1/6/2013 9:14:00 AM

Jackie you know I am with you all the way except for the car, I am a driving instructor, thanks for your comments on my poem and I hope it didn't upset you too much...I have two and I don't know how I could handle it...David

Jackie Thomas
Date: 1/6/2013 9:57:00 AM

No sir, not at all. It has not been long since her death, and from time to time I have my moments even without something reminding me of her death. In fact I absolutely love the poem. ...and thank you! Yes, I have a fear of driving freeways and long distances. It has only been since my car accident in 1997. ; (

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2013 1:39:00 AM

They say the fear of God is the beggining of understanding. A healthy fear would be more in the realm of respect. He is also a relational loving God who knows you and desires for you to know him. Good poem, inspires dialogue.

Jackie Thomas
Date: 1/6/2013 5:34:00 AM

Thank you Mr. Richard! ; ) I am a working progress and coming along. Thanks for the inspiring and encouraging words.

Len Gasun

Date: 1/5/2013 10:00:00 PM

This is so true. Enjoyed your poem my dear Jackie. Thanks for stopping by. love/hugs, Leonora

Jackie Thomas
Date: 1/6/2013 5:35:00 AM

Thank you! {{hugs Jackie