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More often, this soul widens farther than the breath of a moon... and through glittering eyes, I saunter on the ledge of woodland, past time's curfew and nobility: a wanton stroll by a maiden fondling the ripeness of cherries------ that such pageant from embossed ferns weaves a new tune. I twirl along pebbles and sand, kindling night’s liniment glorious as the slow climb of dusk... my wildfire spewing a wanton blaze; -----fearless like some insolent empress rising from chambers, burning oil or watering pewter stones while dragonflies sleep in a lull... and I wrap my navel radiant in the flickering, feathering night, differently cloaked in such moistened heat. -----------this way, my world reinvents the fragrance of a song. Contest: Don’t fight it ….write it!!! Sponsor; John Lawless 8/15/2015

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Date: 8/21/2015 3:08:00 PM
I love this and I hear, that fragrance...ummmm...
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Date: 8/17/2015 3:37:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on the DON'T FIGHT IT.....WRITE IT!! contest... SKAT
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Date: 8/15/2015 6:19:00 PM
fantastic imagery and the image you found is simply breathtaking - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx7
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:27:00 PM
For me this one of your most imaginative poems. A real sense of " individualism" of a moment with a cutting-edge feel. I'm thankful for your laudatory greetings!
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Date: 8/15/2015 5:47:00 AM
Interesting picture and work..Way to go for the contest..I am sure this one will get John's attention..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am way old..No birthdate needed..LOL..Sara
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Date: 8/14/2015 6:03:00 PM
Hello again. Your imagination knows no bounds!To take on the character and give it an intriguing, unusual persona is the sign of a true artist. This is an excellent poem which opens a new literary route and imagery.
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Date: 8/14/2015 2:29:00 PM
You sure have an endless readership. With great poems like yours, no wonder it is so large. Jim Horn
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Date: 8/14/2015 2:27:00 PM
Fantastic fantasy, wonderful imagery
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Date: 8/14/2015 2:18:00 PM
Can't help but say this flows like exotic syrup from the mouth. Your images are enchanting, sultry, and way out of the ordinary!
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Date: 8/14/2015 12:40:00 PM
Fantastic imagery in this, Nette! A beautiful write! Love, Kim
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