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Fear Would Come At Lights Out

Remembering once again childhood days When mother would on warm days let fire die Maybe she would stop me from my fun play We would go for that afternoon walk__sigh Down long road to the branch across the way With our small pails probably once held lard Back then everything was fried in that day We would look for vein of whitewash real hard After gathering the whitewash head home Where mother would clean around fireplace hearth She would remove ashes; set the soft tone For our home, on her hands_ knees clean no mirth She would then whitewash the hearth inside rim Glistening clean white, adding wood stoke fire It would crackle send tiny sparks to swim Briefly in air like stars of night aspire Gathering around the fire family time News, stories, tall tales; safe and warm no doubt Gradually fire would die into bed climb Fear would come for daddy would say lights out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/22/2010 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen's contest "Lights Out". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:41:00 PM
Never was scared of the dark but I know if one were it would be dreadful to hear "Lights Out" Great poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2010 9:34:00 PM
i'm still scared of the dark sara, still close my closets lol congrats on your lovely poem :D
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:08:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem in the Lights Out contest.. awesome write and win for u to enjoy.. with luv.. hope u and Doris are feeling lots better today.. luv..
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:59:00 PM
I think this poem is lovely, full of warm and cozy memories ~~~
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Date: 7/19/2010 3:07:00 PM
Christmas should be yes Sara but it's not for everyone..sigh BIG hugs!
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:49:00 AM
Yes the contest MY Inspiration is up now...BIG hugs! Lovely family write above! Light & love
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:30:00 AM
I would have to say that it was really light out for it was one light hanging down from the ceiling..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:16:00 AM
Brilliant Sara.. an exquisite write and entry for Dane Ann's great contest.. good luck with this rare beauty.. with luv..
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:54:00 AM
When I was a kid yet I could not fall asleep without a light on. Well chosen imagery, Sara! And thank you for your kind comments! Have a great week and best wishes of recovery for your daughter!...Gert
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:20:00 AM
A nice entry to the contest. Good Luck
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:53:00 AM
enjoyed, reading this!! Have not heard that story before, sounds like a great memory to have!
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:50:00 AM
I feel the fire and smell the wood burning, great scene you paint here... Michael..
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