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Fear With the Dark

lying alone dark is the night dark are my thoughts dark is my life embrace my fear call it near nurture and love it share my tears wait for the light shine through the room gone is my fear gone is my tomb vision an angel from now in the dark bringing me love not fear in my heart goodbye my old friend you helped me not much light is my new love I wont keep in touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/23/2013 12:44:00 PM
Lovely piece....penetrated the deepest chords of my existence...
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/24/2013 2:11:00 PM
i'm glad you felt it deep oluwatom glad you read tina x
Date: 9/21/2013 2:31:00 PM
i feel the need for that light right now myself.
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/24/2013 2:10:00 PM
we all need the light thanx john tina x
Date: 9/19/2013 3:06:00 PM
- Sad goodbye to the past .... happiness is in the future ..well done,Tina ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/24/2013 2:09:00 PM
thank you anna tina x
Date: 9/17/2013 1:32:00 AM
Interesting poem... it depict change of state and atmosphere. I'm touched Tina, Best, Jacob
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/17/2013 2:44:00 AM
thanks jacob for reading it all the best tina x
Date: 9/16/2013 11:34:00 AM
YOU DUG IN THE OCEAN FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/16/2013 12:02:00 PM
thanx liam, the deeper you dig the more exciting the treasure lol thanx tina x
Date: 9/16/2013 9:29:00 AM
Hi Tina, deep.... a strong goodbye ~SKAT~
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/16/2013 12:01:00 PM
skat so glad you read this piece .it was a strong goodbye thanks tinax
Date: 9/15/2013 11:38:00 PM
Excellent. An interesting write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Tina Moore
Date: 9/16/2013 12:00:00 PM
thank you ravi ,i am happy you enjoyed tina x

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