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Fear the Barrack

Red ,dark barracks,is where fight meet Can you stand in spite of retreat? You can't see the youngster near the Monster,thus his power on the mighty Tower When they go out of fear,they still Need the use of gear,so When the time comes,life will One day be like drums The barracks are a station of will, And the act of drill From that comes the conclusion ,the Fact of a barrack

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/22/2015 3:04:00 PM
- Hello new member: Nevis - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2015 12:08:00 PM
Nevis, this is interesting, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/22/2015 10:26:00 AM
Nevis, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/21/2015 8:13:00 PM
Nevis, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Nevis Devulyte
Date: 5/21/2015 8:54:00 PM
Hi, thanks for the nice welcoming comment. I am turning twelve and lately I like expressing myself through poetry. I am happy to have my newest poetry soup friend. Best wishes, Nevis

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