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Fear of Losing You

No longer affectionate, attentive, thoughtful eyes; instead, an expressionless, invisible, blank stare. No longer strolling hand-in-hand, carelessly; instead, walking moonbeams apart, drifting like clouds. No longer drowning in passionate, lingering kisses; instead, an obligatory, awkward, fleeting peck. No longer two hearts bow-tied with strings; instead, reclusive, lonely hearts, in a noose. No longer dreaming of a lifetime together; instead, an uncertain, somber, painful future. No longer a confident, loving wife; instead, a heartsick, lonely, aging woman, Desperately, afraid of losing you. Tinkerpoet/Heather Mirassou

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/4/2010 1:45:00 AM
ooo this one hurts, Heather. Viva communication and prayer if this poem is reality based. You are certainly talented in your words and descripts, Heather. Well written. Thanks for the soup mail . God bless you and yours.-Robert
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:22:00 PM
A nice poem on lost love and its pain
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:55:00 PM
the feelings one loses after a period of time i imagine, well done,..p.d.
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:50:00 PM
This poem was beautifully written, but full of pain. Going through a divorce two years ago, I understand this pain. Lucky for me I know have the love of my life by my side and know what true love is. Wonderful poem.
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