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Fear Above Me

sharp talons descend
brother rabbit runs from fear
frozen teardrops red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 12/16/2009 6:58:00 PM
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great words in your Haiku Jimbo.. poor little guy ..could see the terror and no where to escape... alas the circle of life... enjoyed ... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 9/21/2009 4:20:00 AM
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Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us James. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 9/20/2009 9:31:00 PM
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Nicely written Haiku, very descriptive of nature in the animal kingdom. Awesome creation. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems. Caroline.
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John Freeman
Date: 9/20/2009 4:51:00 PM
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Your Haiku is masterpiece vivid here James, God job brother, Sincerely Moses
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Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 9/20/2009 10:11:00 AM
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Wonderful Haiku James!! Thank you also for your recent comments on my recall..made me smile to find a kindred soul! ;-) ~Trudy~
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/20/2009 6:16:00 AM
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frozen teardrops red-ow Jim pls no red eyes with tears,no frozen hearts,no fear--so sad dear,sorry didnt see it before--Charma
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/20/2009 5:11:00 AM
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This a scare me to death Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/20/2009 12:56:00 AM
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Like the play on words in the title Jim.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Raul Moreno
Date: 9/19/2009 9:34:00 PM
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Powerful imagery James, nice work...Raul
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