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Favorite Flower

Daffodils of gold wind their way through heaven's green pastures As angels whisper through the meadows of my mind Fragrance forgotten through the passing years Forever dormant, lingers in sphere of time Ominously transparent in the shells of life Done now are things I cannot change If only I could return the fragrance that I stole Letting you know that I seek forgiveness Soon all seasons would shower daffodils

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/18/2015 8:16:00 PM
wow, I love how you did this. I never got to see it earlier and now I can see it was in that contest judged a while back. Big congrats. I hope it scored high. So clever to do it as acrostic.
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 7:18:00 AM
Hello Andrea....you're blowing it out of the water with your latest winning writes....so thank you very much for being here, Oh great warrior....
Date: 11/10/2015 8:51:00 PM
Judy, congratulations on your “Favorite Flower" win a 7 ! :)
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Eve...as they say in New Orleans, "You Da Best!"
Date: 11/10/2015 11:55:00 AM
Judy, Congratulations on your "Favorite Flower win." SKAT
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/10/2015 1:20:00 PM
thank you boot SKAT n boogie....appreciate you as always....
Date: 11/9/2015 2:31:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Judy:-) hugs Jan xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/9/2015 3:12:00 PM
what happened????????????? time to look.....
Date: 11/9/2015 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/9/2015 3:12:00 PM
will have to go look...unaware...but thank you
Date: 11/9/2015 12:31:00 PM
Judy, I am back reading this beauty again, and I want to thank you so much for your awesome contest and for my placement within ~
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/9/2015 12:44:00 PM
Thank you nothing broken about your wings....and I enjoy your poem...has such depth....that takes talent...and you've got it kid..
Date: 11/5/2015 1:57:00 AM
how engaging are you words, delicate and as pretty as the daffodils, judy.. love this side of you!..huggs!
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/9/2015 12:44:00 PM
Love all your sides....thanks for stopping....busy girl
Date: 11/4/2015 2:10:00 AM
Judy, I am awarding your poem a 7 for its emotional quality and also for its clarity. GL in the contest. Julia, xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/4/2015 8:30:00 PM
Thank You Julia...appreciate it and again...glad you joined....
Date: 11/4/2015 12:23:00 AM
Judy, I LOVE your flower poem and I want to thank you so much for my first place in your contest, so appreciated
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/4/2015 8:30:00 PM
you are most welcome....you always write a first place...YOU GO GIRL!
Date: 11/3/2015 2:31:00 PM
good luck... :) SKAT
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/3/2015 2:47:00 PM
LOL still alive...nuff said!
Date: 11/3/2015 7:13:00 AM
This is lovely Judy!
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/3/2015 8:27:00 AM
I do thank you Balveen....
Date: 11/2/2015 4:49:00 PM
This is lovely Judy. Daffodils are beautiful flowers.
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/2/2015 5:26:00 PM
Agree. Once had 13 acres of them...smelled heavenly...and all around the fence of those acres...grew wisteria...so heavenly...
Date: 11/2/2015 3:44:00 PM
a wonderful acrostic with lovely imagery and an ethereal quality to it Judy:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Judy Konos
Date: 11/2/2015 5:29:00 PM
Hey Girl....yep...acrostic...lol...thanks

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